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definitely

i wish i could do stuff like this, but since i'm all digital and i'm just starting to learn the guitar, alas i cannot. i could always add wind effects, but it's just not the same.

i've heard stuff like this before...BUT!

...this has more to it, it's a very good instrumental. add some screaming lyrics during the rocking parts and sort of whispery vocals in the quiet parts you'd head straight to the top ten.

Love-Hate-War responds:

Haha, well im in two bands with all that singing/screaming malarky, so I wanted to let my guitar do the singing in this song, though thanks for the review, much appreciated!!

omg...ruined.

your singing rhythm and intonation is horrible, the recording is bad also. i can tell that you tried but please don't do this again.

Jake-Blues responds:

I know the tempo was off. This was more of a demo track and if I do a different version it will sound much better.

uh dude saying what over garageband loops sucks

lame as fuck. just so you know. you are not cool.

not as bad as you say

i've been noticing this a lot with newgrounds, people combine their crap songs into worse things. this is one of the better ones i've heard.

Anth0n responds:

Thanks....I guess?

keep the incomplete stuff to your self

you have potential, but not music, you need different parts to a song, not just a melody. adding even some simple drums would make this a hundred times better.

stunt296 responds:

I know...Like I said,It's just a start XD

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